Script feedback from Simon

Before we left today, we received our scripts back from Simon that we did on Monday.

Simon gave some verbal feedback to Jack and I about the script.

Positive comments were that the title page was formatted well and that we have some good content in the script. What we need to improve on is the actions and descriptions. Simon told us that we need to remember to write what we [the audience] see on the screen. Add more detail and atmosphere to what we are seeing.

I agree with the feedback. I think I did quite well as this is my first attempt at writing a properly formatted script. I now know that I need to write more of what is seen on screen and set the atmosphere. I need to be a little more descriptive.

I can now use the feedback to assist with my screenwriting.